the slow-motion gets rid of the comedic effect
the comedic effect makes it safer
/less vulnerable/
and this is a practice about vulnerability
and your vulnerability makes me feel safe with you
someone had your name last month
and in the same room someone else stole your scent
when that happens, it is hard to believe you haven't evaporated into a million atoms of air
strewn about the city
which would, in fact, not be so bad
because then i might have swallowed you a little bit more
/this next line sounds kind of like the fonz/
hey, christ, how's it going? ate a little bit of you in the breeze this morning.
see.
there you are again.
making little jokes no one else finds funny to relieve the anxiety of your overwhelming vulnerability.
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